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Excellent posting of audience feedback.  I feel that you have begun to fully evaluate this - but needs developing in relation to the task set and reception theory.  You need  to reflect more fully on audience comments and ensure that you fully explore what is being said.  Do try in evaluation to take on board what was good about your video and what criticisms were offered by your audience.  You can also make links to real media products and please do consider oppositional and negotiated readings.

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Excellent evaluation task, which is well presented and makes all the right points.  The only area's for development with your presentation are to inclide more links to real media like you have done with the Wanted and to add stronger address of the question set.  You can do this by thinking how the MV and ancilliary tasks worlk together as a campaign in terms of a brand image.  I also feel that stronger reference to the need for a star image and Dyer and well this works in your marketing mix.  Could the poster be improved for example?  It looks very different to the rest of the campaign.  Well done.

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Very good evaluation of the use of conventions in your promotional music campaign.  Very good use of image and text which is succinct and makes some really good points, backed by academic argument.

There are a couple of points about the presentation that needs to be developed:

1. Use a fuller range of media examples - that is linked ideas from your coursework to actual media production.

2. Provide a broader evaluation of where you have used, developed or challenged conventions.  This could take the form of an explanatory paragraph or two.

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Good production work this week, evident in your blog and powerpoint presentation.  The written entry needs to be broken into separate posts, otherwise it simply reads as a posted essay.  Try to incorporate more analysis in your posts and employ appropriate media language.  Well done nonetheless.

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Excellent blog of CD digipak design and photoshoot.  Clearly accounts for production whilst considering the relationship between institution, the design of the text and audience.  Do try and fit any theory into your practice, for example on conventions and star image and the use of marketing for more academic argument.  One other area for development is to present your photo shoot in a more dynamic way, other than simply post images onto the blog.  Well done.

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All of your embedded links to google docs work! This adds an excellent dimension to your blogging in evaluation of your planning, which is sustained and detailed. There is thought and reflection throughout your blogs. I think that the blog in terms of its presentation needs to be tidied slightly and you would benefit from considering the development of your powerpoint's to include images alongside he points you make for example, in discussion of lighting and props. Second, a tighter link to media concepts would benefit your points on planning, for example with reference to mise en scene or lighting as directional or has having special effects used.
An excellent set of posts nonetheless.

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Can you please post who the target audience is and the reearch into CD covers and digi packs - do a presentation or mood board if it is easier.

Your response is sound and you have been creative with your blogs, I particularly like the use of headings with good layout and desigN.  Your postrs require a little more detail to them.

You have a secure knowledge and understanding of who you want your artist to be signed to; perhaps you could link this further by stressing the advantages that your artist has signed to the particular record label. 

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You have a creative set of posts on your blog which is good, but pay more attention to presentation and be consistent with this, for example in the layout and use of colour.  The blog is detailed, but appears in two different parts - the theory and your concept.  Would would be better to develop is how the theory can be linked to to your concept - for example, use quotes to explain the points you want to make.  Whn posting the lyrics, try the website lyricsmode.com and you can embed these onto your blog.