You have a creative set of posts on your blog which is good, but pay more attention to presentation and be consistent with this, for example in the layout and use of colour. The blog is detailed, but appears in two different parts - the theory and your concept. Would would be better to develop is how the theory can be linked to to your concept - for example, use quotes to explain the points you want to make. Whn posting the lyrics, try the website lyricsmode.com and you can embed these onto your blog.
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